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After grading papers over the spring break, many of which needed more work . . . much, much more work, I’m looking forward to edX software that supposedly will be provided free at some point, this according to an article in The New York Times last Thursday by John Markoff:

Imagine taking a college exam, and, instead of handing in a blue book and getting a grade from a professor a few weeks later, clicking the “send” button when you are done and receiving a grade back instantly, your essay scored by a software program.

And then, instead of being done with that exam, imagine that the system would immediately let you rewrite the test to try to improve your grade.

EdX, the nonprofit enterprise founded by Harvard and the Massachusetts Institute of Technology to offer courses on the Internet, has just introduced such a system and will make its automated software available free on the Web to any institution that wants to use it. The software uses artificial intelligence to grade student essays and short written answers, freeing professors for other tasks.

The new service will bring the educational consortium into a growing conflict over the role of automation in education. Although automated grading systems for multiple-choice and true-false tests are now widespread, the use of artificial intelligence technology to grade essay answers has not yet received widespread endorsement by educators and has many critics.

As Sidney J. Mussberger (Paul Newman) might say in The Hudsucker Proxy, “Sure, sure, sure, Kid.”

There are always critics, but could you imagine a world in which essays were at least free of some of the errors I see over and over again? Fragments would be eliminated. Run-ons would be a thing of the past. Subjects and verbs would always agree. Verb tenses wouldn’t leap from past perfect to present to future perfect and back again. And commas and semicolons wouldn’t be sprinkled throughout papers like dandruff on a bald man’s shoulders.

I’m probably dreaming, but in dreams one finds hope. Let’s listen, e.g., to Professor Mark Shermis:

Mark D. Shermis, a professor at the University of Akron in Ohio, supervised the Hewlett Foundation’s contest on automated essay scoring and wrote a paper about the experiment. In his view, the technology — though imperfect — has a place in educational settings.

With increasingly large classes, it is impossible for most teachers to give students meaningful feedback on writing assignments, he said. Plus, he noted, critics of the technology have tended to come from the nation’s best universities, where the level of pedagogy is much better than at most schools.

“Often they come from very prestigious institutions where, in fact, they do a much better job of providing feedback than a machine ever could,” Dr. Shermis said. “There seems to be a lack of appreciation of what is actually going on in the real world.”

Exactly, though I wish he hadn’t placed me in competition with a machine.

Four media critics wrote about media violence’s effects in yesterday’s New York Times:
Big Bang Theories: Violence on Screen
As violence permeates what we see on movie, TV and video-game screens, critics for The Times consider the impact. A.O. Scott and Manohla Dargis, co-chief movie critics, explore the history and mythology of on-screen violence. The TV Watch columnist Alessandra Stanley differentiates between different types of violence on TV, while Chris Suellentrop puts video-game carnage in perspective.
For those in my English classes, I should like to remind you that I chose effect as the verb in the title because it means to produce rather than affect, which means to influence. Please remember each noun’s meaning. An affect relates to emotions: His affect didn’t change after the accident. An effect relates to results: The effect was catastrophic. As an exercise, write a single sentence that uses both affect and effect as a verb and noun.

Writing in the latest edition of Pacific Standard magazine, Ethan Watters, in “We Aren’t the World,” reports on recent scientific results that question psychology’s assumptions that the brain is a psychological invariant. This assumption has led over the past several decades to the belief, e.g., that testing a western college student is comparable to testing the indigenous people of Peru.

This is not only interesting because you might find this assumption rather odd, but it also addresses some of the discussions we’ve had in my English 4 class regarding Dan Ariely’s experiments with college students and Israeli professors.

A Tax to Pay for War

R. Russell Rumbaugh argues in yesterday’s NY Times that we should tax ourselves when we go to war.

Academic Freedom Vindicated in Brooklyn

Stanley Fish argues that a campus is the best place to hear debates on controversial topics.

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I hope that you had a restful and interesting winter break and that if you were sick like many in the nation, your recovery was speedy.

Links to your class can be found at the top right of this page at teaching links, or you can go to QCounty.com, where the link path to my Solano classes is a bit shorter, or you can follow this link to go directly to this semester.

Alex S. Jones from WHYY's Fresh Air site

Alex Jones in Losing the News: The Future of the News That Feeds Democracy writes that political scientist Robert Entman divides the media into four categories, traditional journalism, tabloid journalism, advocacy journalism and entertainment, and that these categories can be distinguished by the degree to which they commit to five journalistic standards:

The first four are accuracy, balance, holding government accountable, and separation of news from editorial and advertising. The fifth standard is the degree to which there is a determination to maximize profit. (43)

In addition, Jones claims that the profession of traditional journalism creates an iron core of information critical to democracy and that this FeCore has a hierarchy of  four layers: bearing witness, following up, explaining, and investigating.

Here are some examples of each:

Entertainment: Funny Cats

Advocacy Journalism: I Was a Welfare Mother

Tabloid Journalism: Vice Magazine

Traditional Journalism:

Greg Hampikian’s column Men, Who Needs Them? in Friday’s New York Times certainly had me wondering, as a man, whether I’m necessary. I thought about sending the column to my two sons, but isn’t there enough going on already?

The argument structure of this essay is spoton and funny even if it doesn’t hold out much hope for the male gender.

I hope you had a restful and interesting summer break.

Links to your class can be found at the top right of this page or you can go to QCounty.com, where the link path to my Solano classes is a bit shorter.

Writing in today’s New York Times, Edwidge Danticat, a Haitian-American author whose works my English 1 students have read in previous semesters, says that the title “Holiday on ICE” for the congressional hearing dealing with the treatment of migrants by the U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement agency is flippant.

She reminds us that the more than 110 migrants who have died in immigration custody since 2003, her uncle among them, were hardly on holiday:

The flippant title of the hearing shows a blatant disregard for the more than 110 people who have died in immigration custody since 2003. One of them was my uncle Joseph, an 81-year-old throat cancer survivor who spoke with an artificial voice box. He arrived in Miami in October 2004 after fleeing an uprising in Haiti. He had a valid passport and visa, but when he requested political asylum, he was arrested and taken to the Krome detention center in Miami. His medications for high blood pressure and an inflamed prostate were taken away, and when he fell ill during a hearing, a Krome nurse accused him of faking his illness. When he was finally transported, in leg chains, to the prison ward of a nearby hospital, it was already too late. He died the next day

“My uncle’s brief and deadly stay in the United States immigration system was no holiday. Detention was no holiday for Rosa Isela Contreras-Dominguez, who was 35 years old and pregnant when she died in immigration custody in Texas in 2007. She had a history of blood clots, and said her complaints regarding leg pains were ignored. It was no holiday for Mayra Soto, a California woman who was raped by an immigration officer. It was no holiday for Hiu Lui Ng, a 34-year-old Chinese immigrant with a fractured spine who was dragged on the floor and refused the use of a wheelchair in an ICE detention center in Rhode Island.

Such treatment brings many words to my mind that are much harsher than flippant.